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Constructive Criticism is appreciated. If something is terrible, don't say it is terrible. Say why it is terrible. include component="comments" page="Critique" limit="30"Alec you had a great poem it was very poetic. I think you could have made the figurative language and sound devices a little bit better. but overall great poem. -Tori

Awe Alec! This poem was very sentimental and expressive! I would agree with Tori though on adding more poetic techniques and devices. -Madalyn